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Post by Freeball on Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:42 pm

Here's a few of my older compositions. I'll try to get some new shizz up soon.








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Post by Veks on Wed Dec 15, 2010 10:21 pm


Color flow fits lets say almost perfect/visible depth,text could be better(colors also),Light spot missing,no dark/light corners.Left/light
Try and pick colors from the render,and place them in a way, so that it won't look forced,or innapropiate.
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I do love this one,text bothers me(too simple compared with the release itself),i do love those lines(waves of sound,that makes her to really stand out and be the main focus point)
Colors are also abit messy,do not add your own,or leave the c4d with his stock colors, use Hue/Saturation to spot that.Also Right up,next to her hair,you could add a strong light spot.

But the main weakness of yours is color balance,you need to learn and control your colours varieties.

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